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Star Butterfly by rongs1234 Star Butterfly by rongs1234
Just some fanart for "Star vs the Forces of Evil"
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Critique by FarBeyondStrange FarBeyondStrange/critique/1312184894">Nov 8, 2015, 4:50:47 AM
Somehow, an I can't articulate the details, you've captured the same energy from the show while being distinctively your own. Your lines have a bold fluidity that sucks me in and makes me want to come along for the ride.

The one flaw I feel is that the laser puppies (<== most awesome thing ever) don't share the same flow as the more aerodynamic narwhals. I feel this minor grip would be remedied by distorting their heads and bodies a bit so that the spherical shapes are more oriented in the desired direction.

But this is merely a minor issue. Overall, this is just a great pic that I'm glad I could critique.
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Critique by FaithBField FaithBField/critique/1312231809">Nov 8, 2015, 7:55:42 AM
Well, It seems to me that you put some details on Star's dress and wand.
Star vs the Forces of Evil is much like Sailor Moon because it's an anime influenced TV show that the creator has done through. Although the colors are bright as the color scheme depicts in this show. I think the narwhal and the puppy looks so cute because they are so adorable. So, If you work as an artist on Star vs the Forces of Evil, come work at Disney by getting an job interview and show them your resume, then they will hire you.
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CreatureCre8tr Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015  Student Writer
Omigawd, you're so awesome!!! My most favorite disney show ever drawn by one of the greatest artists I know! Thank you for this Star-lit gift!
mmpaperguy1 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
Gashi-Gashi's Star Butterfly picture is the best i've seen.
DarkRonin21 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
This is definitely awesome
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November 6, 2015
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