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Rogue

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Finished that sketch of Rogue I posted a few days ago, tried to fix some stuff from the original sketch, and used that pic of her from "X-men VS Street Fighter" as a ref.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Saw you ask for critique, and I've been silently watching you for a while now, so here goes. I tried to give realistic and fair ratings, so here's how I'd break it down:

VISION:
It is clear what you were trying to do, and it came out exactly as planned, this is such a classic pose.

ORIGINALITY:
While I love Rogue, there's just not much going on. The bright yet featureless background left a lot to be desired. Even a title card would have helped spice it up.

TECHNIQUE:
Your style is super cute and lends itself well to fanworks, but there is one aspect that bugs me, namely the uniformity of inklines. if you made inner lines thinner and thicken the lines along the silhouette, the perspective on the fist would really pop out.

IMPACT:
This is a great piece, overall. It was at least good enough to get me to want to stick around and talk about it. I look forward to seeing more of your work!