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an update on the other animation, which has been moved to my scraps. I mostly tweeked the kick, added some frames to make the kick slow down and added some new frames to smooth the animation and added some little sort of swish/blurr thing

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:iconfalcon187:
Much better with the kick slowed down. The only thing I can possibly see that would make this more cool is if she shifted her weight when she punched.

Overall, very nice.
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:iconwyrmul:
Yeah, that really smoothed out the kick, especially the swish thing. Very nice
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:iconchelo-kun:
~Chelo-kun Jul 20, 2009  Professional Filmographer
I like it.
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:iconikki952001:
~ikki952001 Jul 20, 2009  Student Artist
superb work keep it up
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:iconmistypine01:
Mood: Love ~mistypine01 Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent animation, Rings. Great improvement with the kicks and punches.
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:iconzamiecat:
^^ very nice love the moment
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:iconhitmann:
~HitmanN Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I second what Kenj said. Looks better, but the upper body, or at least shoulder could go along with the first punches a bit. They seem more like pokes now, followed by a punch and a kick. xP
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:iconoriginalunoriginal:
that does actually look better. :)
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:iconr3537l1f3:
~R3537L1F3 Jul 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome
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:iconswanart:
~SwanArt Jul 19, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
keep the body moving during the kick. By having the leg pull her forward, then when she pulls it back she goes back to normal.
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