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April 2, 2013
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My Roll by rongs1234 My Roll by rongs1234
Been sort of messing with coming up with my own versions of Mega Man characters, all my original sketches where really rough a chibi looking and awhile refining them i thought of drawing the chibi design of Roll i did in more of her proper proportions. She looks pretty cute to me.

Dunno why but i thought it would be interesting if each character had a different geometric shaped white highlight in their eyes. So i gave Roll a triangle which gives her some what of a pie crust eye allot of old cartoons had.
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I really do love your drawing, but I'm going to give an honest review.

Vision: The artwork is very simple. The concept behind the drawing is easy to figure out but the theme doesn't stand out enough to receive full points.

Originality: Some originality is being shown in her outfit. I've seen her standing position before in a game called Sonic Battle.

Technique: The contrast and color variations are perfect. I also like the choice of "shine effects". They aren't overused and look well on the drawing. The only issue I see is her left eye. When you look close enough at her eyes, they don't seem to go together.

Impact: The artwork has no particular message. It does not make me think about anything specific.

Bonus: Love her hair; it looks very good! Her arms and legs were also well done.

Final Thoughts: A very simple drawing that looks exceptionally well. The lineart is very neat and shadows are used appropriately. Not fully original but looks good regardless, despite not making you think.

Final Score: 4/5
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Blue-Sky-Jen Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
How cute!! ^_^
neilbissett Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Tailikku1 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Makes me want to hug her
TheAliami Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, she looks awesome!
Icyton Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
She's so cute! I used to have such a crush on her...
pakozx5 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awww it's so cute >w< i love it! :D
DancrewProductions Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
PrivateDoomsday Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
The eyes look a little uneven, but this pic turned out lovely, other than that; well done, as always! I like how you did her!
LeviGratton Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
D'aw. I suppose my only critique is that her eyes seem a bit disproportionate. I don't know if you were going for a raised brow, or some perspective thing I'm not picking up on.

And maybe her chin is a bit flat. But just a bit.
hikarushirou Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Aahhhh, too much cuuutteee. :faint: Her right (literal) eye is a little bigger than the other though...
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