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Miss Violet out of da pool by rongs1234 Miss Violet out of da pool by rongs1234
So yeah just had the idea draw Miss Violet in a swim suit with he back turned to the viewer but i wanted a context to it so i drew her climbing out of a pool while i was waiting to hear about some commissions. The BG is a little iffy but i had fun trying to make her look wet and shiney. I was going to put that like floral design on her suit but its hard to see at this angle so i just left it out.
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This is the work of true genius to take something as boring and bland as a swimsuit and a pool and give it some new life.

The wet and shiny look is spot on.

The black hair and swimsuit is simple and yet powerful.

her smile is both calming and understanding. Her posture is indicative that she trusts the person taking the picture.
It also displays that she is both relaxed and yet confident.

The background is neat and uniform, the angles direct the attention towards the target.

I gave this a 2.5 because it's not very original as artworks of females leaving water is very commonplace. The character design deserves a 10 out of 5.

The impact is high, but it could have been higher if the hair had been in pigtails and she was in a different colored swimsuit (like pink or red) to denote the multifaceted side of this character.
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Kinggigasmon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She looks just as good dripping wet as she does with all her makeup on. A natural beauty.
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MKbuster Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconinloveplz:
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mistypine01 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hot beauty can't be cooled off so easily.
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SeiberSaiban Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
I think a simplistic design would've made do. Just a dot with petals around it placed on one area.
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DancrewProductions Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Nothing like going for a nice swim in the pool. Relaxed 
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Very beautiful :lovelyeyes:
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ninjacharles Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
as a teacher i can only imagine the vast armada of students that drool over their teacher
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CMatt-Gray Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Yes, just Yes.
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NickMaster64 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
i would hump her in the pool for a full hoar or more =//w//=
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rezero Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
This is awesome as usual but it wouldve even better if make her dripping wet since she just got out of the pool
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
yeah like i just told Claw there, i did think to do that but i havnt really figured out how that would look in my style
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Son-Void Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looking cute, there, Miss V. :giggle:
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ClawOfTheFallen Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No! My weakness is exploited! Tight suits and butts! D:

Now, seriously... X3
I digged how you did the reflected light on her body, but the watter riples look a lil' too uniform.
The source of the ripples is usually the most distorted and it gets less distorted the most  an image is away from the ripple.
I can't really describe it. Just that image distortion by water is gradual. XD
You could try drawing water coursing down and dripping from her body next time? =D
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
yeah i just used a filter to get that ripple effect along with a mask so that only the parts that are suppose to be under water have the ripple

as for water dripping off her, i had thought of doing that but ive never really solidified how that looks in my style. Times ive tried it looks like they are sweating 
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ClawOfTheFallen Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the dripping on that image looks quite good!
There's already the bathing context so it doesn't appear as just sweating.
I digged it. :3c
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JosephCollins Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Weeeeelp, that's sexy.  Distractingly sexy!
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DarkRonin21 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Dat Tushie
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LimeTH Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Miss V pictures are always insta-fave.
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GaiaX2 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
So, how long's she been around? I don't think you've given us her first name since her character's conception..
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AtomicKingBoo Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
another artwork done by the rongs :)
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RyanJampole Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
dude, dat tooshie.
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
yes, it has that effect on people XP
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Yasha-K Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Vary spiffy ripple effect on the water :D and i thank yah could have expanded on that floral pattern on the back of the swim suit.
I Love her wet slicked back hair style. 
On the critique end, Her inner butt cheek looks a bit flat.
Over all i like this! Awesome Job man :D 
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
thanks, i really wanted to make her look wet, and yeah her butt could use a bit more work
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Yasha-K Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A good reference to slick shiny wet skin, I would suggest (long sigh) masamune shiro's work.
I may have many indifference's with his artwork but he is a master of that shiny wet color look.

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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
oh yeah the Ghost in the Shell, Tank Police guy. I dont think im gonna use his art as a ref cuz i knew what i wanted to do and i did it, but i like some of his works
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Yasha-K Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yah that guy.
I definitely would not advocate anyone tyring to color like him, unless they do so already.
However i cant name off any other artist off hand that are good with that shine look.
Maby Josh Lesnick's older adult work from slipshine.
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NeoduelGX Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Hot. I hope to see more Ask Miss Violet answers soon.
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
I hope to do more of those when i can think of good answers to them
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NeoduelGX Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Great, because I already asked my question: comments.deviantart.com/1/3873…
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QuadManX Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey there, Miss V. Lookin' good there. :D

Awesome job dood. Well done all around.
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ArsonDadko Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow... some swimsuit!
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Ryou-Bakura-154 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't hate yourself for your background. Better than mine by 20000000000%
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